I set my purple backpack down in the girl’s locker room of the Truckee Community Pool.
I pull on my navy blue suit and stretch my cap over my head.
I grab my goggles and walk out of the moldy locker room.
I hear a faint voice traveling from the back of my head, “Swimmers up on the blocks!” I step up onto the grippy diving block, primed for the 500 Free. The British voice booms again: “Swimmers take your mark!” I bend over and finger the edge of the block.
My heart sprints.
My heart sprints.
And then I hear it: the long blow of the horn. I spring off the block and plunge into the 2012 London Summer Olympics. When I emerge from my streamline, nothing is faint anymore. I hear hundreds, thousands of people yelling my name!
I accelerate into freestyle, a stroke I’ve worked on for years but have never perfected… until now.
Flip after flip after flip, I swim the 500. 20 laps of power, commitment, serious strategy. I will pace myself the first ten laps and then go hard the last ten.
150 yards in, I look to my right and see only the fingertips of Kate, the fastest girl in the gold group. She is falling desperately behind.
And then I look to my left and see… Michael Phelps!!
He struggles, too, to keep up with… ME!!!!!!
He struggles, too, to keep up with… ME!!!!!!
Seeing his limitations just makes me faster.
On my last lap, I go all out. When my hand slams the wall, the finish, I have to wait 10 minutes for Kate and then another 16 seconds for Michael.
We all shake hands.
I grip the rim of the pool and sink under a few feet then push my body up out of the water.
My signature move.
Standing on the slimy deck of the pool, water dripping down my legs, I look around.
I see a few scattered cars in the parking lot.
Three moms chat while their kids learn to swim at the shallow end.
A teenage lifeguard is texting.
I remove my Truckee Tahoe Swim Team cap. It yanks my hair.
I walk back into the dingy locker room. Followed by Kate.
By Eleanore
By Eleanore
Eleanore,
ReplyDeleteHA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
My favorite part was the moldy locker room. It just was. It couldn't be anything else. that TOTALY describes the TTST locker room. :)
Yacob
Thanks Yacob!
ReplyDeleteThere is mold all over the shower curtains in the girl's room. It is so gross!! They also really need a suit dryer there. LZ
Eleanore, your first sentence is fabulous. It's simple and so clear. I love how you took your original first sentence and tucked it into the piece. I love how you use Steinbeck's "and then;" I LOVE your "signature move." Every swimmer has one, doesn't she? I think having Michael on one side (fantasy) and Kate on the other (reality) is so clever. Not in and out of fantasy so much as side to side. I really like how the end is a dingy disappointment. :) So great. Me
ReplyDelete""And then I look to my left and see....Michael Phelps!!" Just by that one sentence I can tell your imagination has NO limits! Great job Eleanore!
ReplyDeleteLogy
just terrific.
ReplyDeletei loved "my signature move" the best.
how do you know michael?
love you. grommy