Tuesday, October 4, 2011

Swimming Fantasy

I set my purple backpack down in the girl’s locker room of the Truckee Community Pool.
I pull on my navy blue suit and stretch my cap over my head. 
I grab my goggles and walk out of the moldy locker room.


I hear a faint voice traveling from the back of my head, “Swimmers up on the blocks!” I step up onto the grippy diving block, primed for the 500 Free. The British voice booms again: “Swimmers take your mark!” I bend over and finger the edge of the block. 
My heart sprints.


And then I hear it: the long blow of the horn. I spring off the block and plunge into the 2012 London Summer Olympics. When I emerge from my streamline, nothing is faint anymore. I hear hundreds, thousands of people yelling my name!


I accelerate into freestyle, a stroke I’ve worked on for years but have never perfected… until now.


Flip after flip after flip, I swim the 500.  20 laps of power, commitment, serious strategy.  I will pace myself the first ten laps and then go hard the last ten.


150 yards in, I look to my right and see only the fingertips of Kate, the fastest girl in the gold group. She is falling desperately behind.


And then I look to my left and see… Michael Phelps!! 
He struggles, too, to keep up with… ME!!!!!!


Seeing his limitations just makes me faster.


On my last lap, I go all out. When my hand slams the wall, the finish, I have to wait 10 minutes for Kate and then another 16 seconds for Michael.


We all shake hands.


I grip the rim of the pool and sink under a few feet then push my body up out of the water. 
My signature move.


Standing on the slimy deck of the pool, water dripping down my legs, I look around. 
I see a few scattered cars in the parking lot.  
Three moms chat while their kids learn to swim at the shallow end. 
A teenage lifeguard is texting.


I remove my Truckee Tahoe Swim Team cap. It yanks my hair.  
 I walk back into the dingy locker room. Followed by Kate.




By Eleanore

5 comments:

  1. Eleanore,
    HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
    My favorite part was the moldy locker room. It just was. It couldn't be anything else. that TOTALY describes the TTST locker room. :)

    Yacob

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  2. Thanks Yacob!
    There is mold all over the shower curtains in the girl's room. It is so gross!! They also really need a suit dryer there. LZ

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  3. Eleanore, your first sentence is fabulous. It's simple and so clear. I love how you took your original first sentence and tucked it into the piece. I love how you use Steinbeck's "and then;" I LOVE your "signature move." Every swimmer has one, doesn't she? I think having Michael on one side (fantasy) and Kate on the other (reality) is so clever. Not in and out of fantasy so much as side to side. I really like how the end is a dingy disappointment. :) So great. Me

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  4. ""And then I look to my left and see....Michael Phelps!!" Just by that one sentence I can tell your imagination has NO limits! Great job Eleanore!

    Logy

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  5. just terrific.
    i loved "my signature move" the best.
    how do you know michael?
    love you. grommy

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