I like how Steinbeck makes Billy Buck so insightful, as if he had faced the challenge of "getting throwed" a million times. And Billy Buck is so confident at how he tells Jody what to do. I have a question. Does Steinbeck know that what what Billy Buck says is true?
2. "Then he lay on his back in the grass and looked up at the dumpling summer clouds. By closing one eye and destroying all perspective, he brought them down within reach so he could put up his fingers and stroke them. He helped the gentle wind down the sky. It seemed to him that they went faster for his help. One fat white cloud he helped to clear the mountain rims and pressed it firmly out of sight."
In this paragraph I find it interesting that Jody wants to help the clouds instead of hurt them like he usually does to animals like mutilating the buzzard, killing the bird with the slingshot, throwing the stone at the cat, and making Doubletree Mutt get this nose snapped in the rat trap. When Steinbeck says, "by closing one eye and destroying all perspective," it made me want to try it. (It works!)
3. "The damp ground chilled his bare feet. At the cypress tree the roosting turkeys chattered a little in alarm, and the two good dogs responded to their duty and came charging out, barking to frighten away the coyotes they thought were prowling under the tree."
I like how the dogs did not just come running out, they came "charging out, barking". I also like how the "roosting turkeys chattered". I can just imagine the scene in the dark. It's easy to put myself in Jody's place and say "the damp ground chilled my bare feet".
4. "He heard the dull rushing sound that space and silence make. He heard one of the dogs, out in the doghouse, scratching a flee and bumping his elbow against the floor with every stroke."
Until reading this, I never realized that space and silence made a sound. I love how Steinbeck describes the dogs "elbow" bumping the floor. I never thought that dogs had elbows.
Jacob
Yes! Jacob, you see so clearly THROUGH Steinbeck's writing. Yes, Billy Buck must have taken the challenge a million times! It's true and I hadn't thought about that. I love Billy Buck because he's such a tough and wise ranch hand, but a gentle one, too. Proves you can be all three! I love helping the clouds too. It's true. And yet in helping the clouds, he's controlling even them! Way up there! Jody obviously wants some power, doesn't he? Some place to be needed and come through. I also like how you say, "I found it interesting." That's a great way to discuss literature! We're on your journey with you. Yes, the tree. Under and around that tree so much happens and is THOUGHT. Good job including it. I like how Steinbeck's animals have vibrant lives. We hear them. And finally, yes, space and silence have sound. Isn't that just the very best realization? Great job, Jacob. Carolyn
ReplyDeleteGreat job Yacob that was awseome! I almost chose #2 as well but I decieded on something else but that was wanderful choices!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Yacob!!
ReplyDeleteI love how the "roosting turkeys chattered". I think that that is a really good way of showing how they are alarmed but not actually saying they are alarmed.
Nice post! LZ
Make sure you don't get throwed! hahahahah! I love how you love the dogs elbow the graound. Great post (again)!!!!
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